I was in Tui's. There were other teams such as Geckos, Kea's and Kiwis. Once our team was quiet, we rushed hurriedly, to get to the tarpaulins. We were trying to get points for our team by sitting up and folding our arms. We chanted and cheered for our team even if they hadn't come First, Second or Third.
To my surprise, it was my turn, Miss G had said, “Can the 10 year olds come to the beginning of the tracks”. Nervously I walked up to the tracks getting ready to run, BOOM! went the blocks in Mrs Poles hand. It went dangling through my ears as I was running as fast as I could. “Yes!” I made it, 3rd place! ‘Heat’, I saw the flag waving in Mrs Poles hands. The moment had come for our final race. Off we went! I was exhausted once I reached the end. Once again I came 3rd! I reached the tarpaulin, it was exhausting. At Last everything was finished!
“Yes!” time to announce the winners. Keas once again dominated the others! WOW! they ran fast, with a score of 141 points. Once again the bell shrilled a high pitched noise, and we went to buy a lovely BBQ lunch. I deeply sniffed in the BBQ. I was off to play King ball, but then suddenly I was too late! The bell shrilled like never before. HOME TIME! I yelled . I ran straight to the classroom.
It was great to be part of a very exhausting and breathtaking, experience.
Well done Ana I think I was exhausted and breathtaking as well. I like the way you used describing words, similes and the way you made your writing informative....
ReplyDeleteYou have done an splendid job Ana so keep up this hard work so your work can be interesting everytime you do writing or when you make a movie.....
Good Luck Ana
Angelica
You have used some really good vocabulary to describe your experience Anasitasia. Keep up the good work.
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